Sunday, December 2, 2012

CRITIQUE

My concentration is a representation of my trip to Nicaragua. The first image is more literal, and the second is more abstract. On the second one I need to work more on the perspective.



2 comments:

  1. I like these pieces, and they're a step up from your last ones. You should try for more realism, because when you're doing encaustic, you'll always end up with a fairly impressionistic result. I've seen people put strings and stuff in encaustic pieces, maybe you should try that?

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  2. Oh man. Are these precious or what! I think the top one was better since it's easier to figure out what it is and it has a better sense of place then your garbage one. The second one goes more with your original two pieces since it's abracter but what do I know. I think it just needs better dimensions within the piece like a middle ground.

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